雅思写作7分的标准是什么?

我们都知道,雅思7分是个分水岭,7分以上是学霸,7分及以下是普通考生和学渣。而写作又可以说是雅思考试中最难的一科,想拿到写作7分,更是难上加难。所谓“知己知彼,百战百胜”,雅思写作究竟难在哪里,什么样的作文才可以得到考官青睐、斩获7分?让英沃小编带着这些问题,一起来看看雅思写作7分的标准。

task response 切题

· addressesallparts of the task
· presentsa clear position throughoutthereponse
· presents, extend and supports main ideas, but there may be atendency to over-generalise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus.

用中文最简单的理解是:首尾都要回答问题,允许泛泛而谈。这就是说,我们没必要花太多的精力去考虑观点是否绝对严谨是否意义深刻,关键是要告诉考官你的思考逻辑。这就是剑桥雅思的魅力,它要考你的不是你的思维能力,而是你的语言表达能力。哪怕在ridiculous的观点,只要你能用最恰当的语言去表达,你也可以同样得7分(当然,如果你的目标是8分,你就当我痴人说话吧)。还有就是说,很多题目本身包含很广泛的概念,很多大学教授用十几万字都解释不清的关系,怎么就能让我们这些门外汉用三言两语就解释好呢。毕竟我们都是正常人,我们都有自己的思考能力和理解能力,我们说的每一个观点都是makesense,不makesense的是我们没把那个观点说清楚。

coherence and cohesion 连贯性

· logically organisesinformation and ideas, there is clearprogression throughout
· lisesa range of cohesive devicesappropriatelyalthough there may be some under-or over use
· presentsa clear topicwithin each paragragh

用中文最简单的意思是:分段分点,每点之前必须有连接词。这一点非常非常容易达到(我总结了大量这样的词汇,明天或者后天上传上来)。然后那个考官最为推介的范式(以argumentation的题目为例,因为report类的文章更死板了):开头段+主体段(让步一段,支持(反对)两段)+结尾段。其实说白了,就是我们最熟悉不过的模版。也就是说,模版是非常有用的,之所以变成没用是因为用模范的那个人没有用。

lexcial resource 词汇

· usesa sufficient rangeof vocabulary toallow some flexibility and precision
· usesless common lexical itemswith someawareness of style and collocation
· mayproduce occasional errosin wordchoice, spelling and/or word formation用中文最简单的意思是:足够就好,不需要多;一两个大词就够,不需要滥。一说到单词,相信我们并不陌生,甚至认为学英语就是背单词,写作就是单词的选美与堆砌。尽管我们都知道这是不对的,但是依旧默默地坚持着,比如说背诵一大堆除了莎士比亚见过之外其他人都没见过的大词。这样的复习会很累而且会逐渐把雅思写作从逻辑表述变成词汇大杂烩。经过我写了大概30篇雅思作文,我觉得我们需要的词汇其实真的不多我想说的是,记单词最好的方法是,把单词放到句型或者例句上面来,然后句型或者例句一定要与雅思写作topic相关。如果不相关,证明那个词就算记住了,也不会用。

Grammaticalrange and accuracy 语法

· uses a variety of complex structures
· producesfrequent error-free sentences
· hasgood control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few mistake

用中文最简单的意思是:句子结构多样性和允许语法错误的存在。对于句子结构多样性,这一点,我觉得我们中国学生肯定没问题的,什么定语从句,什么名词性从句,什么状语从句,倒装句,虚拟语态,被动语态等,我们只会过犹不及。从我的个人经验来看,我有时候会把定语从句和同位语从句搞乱(并不是我们不知道有什么不同,而是一紧张就很容易忽视了)。说到语法错误,我可以说,我们中国学生最最最常犯的语法错误都是非常低级的。

写作同义词转换表

一、中性动词

1.导致:v.cause, bring about, give rise to, lead to, generate, create, Be a contributingfactor to
2.认为:v.point out, argue, claim, assert, think, consider
3.强调:v.emphasize, bring/call attention to, accentuate, heighten, strengthen
4.集中:v.focus on, concentrate on
5.解决:v.combat, address, tackle, resolve, solve
6.从事:v.carry out, conduct, perform
7.承认:v.concede, admit, acknowledge, accept, allow, grant

二、正向动词

1.支持:v.support, advocate, agree with
2.增加:v.increase, grow, rise, enlarge
n. increase, growth, rise,enlargement
3.改善:v.improve, enhance, upgrade, boost
n. improvement, enhancement, boom
4.扩张:v.expand, enlarge, extend, widen, broaden
n. expansion, enlargement,extension
5.提高:v.augment, increase, develop, intensify
n. augment, increase, development
6.发展:v.develop, advance, grow, evolve, flourish
n. development, advancement,growth, flourishing
7.产生:v.develop, come into being/existence, come about
8.获得:v.acquire, gain, get, obtain, attain
9.执行:v.implement, execute, put into effect, perform
n. implementation, performance
10.实现:v.achieve, fulfill, gain, accomplish, attain
n. achievement, accomplishment, attainment
11.开始:v.commence, begin, start
n. commencement, beginning,start
12. 促进:v.promote, further, advance, encourage, stimulate, foster
n. promotion, advancement
13.鼓励:v.stimulate, encourage, act as stimulus, motivate
n. encouragement, incentive, motivation
14.唤起:v.arouse, cause, induce, prompt, trigger, spark off
15.需要:v.call for, demand, require
16. 取代:v.replace, take the place of, substitute for
n. replacement, substitutionfor, in place of
17. 加快:v.accelerate, speed up, quicken
n. Acceleration, speeding up
18. 减轻:v.abate, lessen, reduce, alleviate, mitigate
n. abatement, lessening,alleviation, mitigation
19. 保护:v.protect, preserve, conserve
n. protection, preservation,conservation
20.保卫:v.safeguard, defend, shield
n. safeguard, defence, shelter
21. 建立:v.establish, set up, found, construct
n. establishment, foundation,construction
22. 遵守(规则,法律):abideby, comply with, follow, respect, act in accordance with
23. 允许:v.allow, permit, give the means to, facilitate

三、负向动词

1.反对:v.object, raise objections, oppose
2.减少:v.decrease, lower, reduce, cut down
n. decrease, reduction, drop,decline
3. 耗尽:v.deplete, exhaust, use up
n. depletion, exhaustion, usingup,
4. 阻碍:v.hamper, hinder, obstruct, impede, inhibit
n. hindrance, obstruction,obstacle, impediment
5.限制:v.limit, curb, restrict, place a limit on
n. limit, restriction
6. 危及:v.endanger, imperil, jeopardize, put at risk
7. 衰败:v.deteriorate, degrade, degenerate, rot
n. deterioration, degeneration
8. 恶化:v.exacerbate, aggravate, worsen, inflame
n. exacerbation, aggravation, worsening
9. 加剧:v.intensify, escalate, sharpen, aggravate
n. escalation, intensification,aggravation
10.破坏:v.damage, destroy, ruin, devastate
n. damage, destruction, ruin,devastation
adj. devastating, destructive
11. 污染:v.pollute, contaminate
n. pollution, contamination
12. 败坏:v.pervert, corrupt, deprave, lead astray, debase
13.扭曲:v.distort, pervert, misrepresent, falsify, misstate, misreport
14.削弱:v.weaken, undermine, impair, invalidate
15. 干涉:v.interfere in/with, intervene in, impinge on/upon(侵犯)
n.interference/intervention/involvement in/with
16. 侵犯:v.encroach on/upon (time/rights/personal life)
n. encroachment on/upon =impinging on/upon
17. 与···相违背/相矛盾:runcounter to = run contrary to
Contradict (each other)= conflict with =be at odds with sth
18.误解:v.misunderstand, misapprehend, misinterpret
n. misunderstanding,misapprehension, misinterpretation
19. 逃避:v.escape, break out, evade, elude
20.遭受:v.suffer from, be stricken with, be afflicted with
21.违反:v.violate, disobey, transgress, infringe
n. violation, infringement,contravention, breach
22. 忽视:v.lose sight of, ignore, neglect
23.疏远:v.alienate, isolate, become/get estranged from
n. alienation, isolation,estrangement

四、其他重要的同义词替换

1.大量的:enormous,massive, tremendous, considerable
2.重要的:significant,substantial, crucial, important
3.严重的:adj.severe, serious, acute, drastic
adv. severely, seriously,acutely, drastically
4. 有害的:adj.hazardous, dangerous, harmful
5. 贫穷的:adj.poor, poverty-stricken, destitute, impoverished
6. 富有的:adj.rich, wealthy, affluent
7. 差距:n.gap, disparity, divergence
8. 积极的:beneficial,advantageous
9.消极的:baneful,detrimental
10. 明显的:manifest,obvious, evident, apparent
11. 影响:impact,repercussion, effect, ramification
12. 人类:thehuman race, human being, humankind, humanity
13. 当代:incurrent society, in this day and age, in present-day society, in contemporarysociety
14. 传统的:traditional,conventional, old-fashioned
15. 健康的:healthy,vigorous, robust
16. 有营养的:nutritious,nourishing, wholesome, healthy

五、常用正向形容词

Adequate/ basic/broad/ general/ sufficient 充分的/基本的/宽泛的/大概的/足够的
Penetrating/profound/ revealing/ remarkable/ proper/ thorough
入木三分的/ 深刻的/ 发人心省的/ 出色的/ 正确的/ 彻底的
Original/ unique/fresh/ rare/ clear/ fascinating/ interesting
独到的/ 独特的/ 新鲜的/ 少有的/ 清楚的/ 生动的/ 有趣的
Significant/substantial/ considerable

六、常用的负向形容词

Unethical/ immoral/unscrupulous/ unprincipled 不道德的
Antisocial/unacceptable/ undesirable 反社会的/不能接受的/令人不快的
Aggressive/ criminal/disruptive/ violent 挑衅的/犯罪的/扰乱的/暴力的
Notorious/ appalling/vicious/ bloody 臭名昭著的/令人震惊的/令人发指的/血腥的